For just one day

• Artist: Sinful Fool
• Description: For just one day
• Date: 11/27/2008
• Tags: just

For just one day
I want the pain
to go away

For just one day
I want to know
What love feels like

For just one day
I want for people
To actually care

For just one day
I want to actually
Smile for real

For just one day
I want these
Annoying people
To disappear

Comments

[To-Chi VIII]

Hold on, I think someone needs to call the waaaah-mbulance.
But seriously, not bad. However, it's not outstanding, and hardly original. Add detail, and stop being so sad! Gosh, it's a downer...

[Y u r a l r i a]

get off your lazy a**. go fell love, go fell a kind smile, go swept someone into your arms. Don't be a dumbass!
gee

[tksunshine93]

I like it, short and to the point, and so very true and it really speaks to me as I'm sure it does others. Good job

[FaLlInG oUt Of ToDaY]

omfg that is so true just maybe put a little bit more emotion in it and then it would really be great i like it as is though !! 5/5

[pretty_face4life]

Me 2. You should write a little bit deeper, and this could be awesome! 4/5