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my luv 4 u is eternal
my luv 4 u is forever
i want 2 be with u
4 ever and ever
together with u
for my luv is eternal
my luv is forever
i want 2 see the greatness
i want 2 see the worst
i want 2 see the kindness
i want 2 feel the burst of luv
cause my luv is eternal
my luv is forever
- by Smighty Mithra |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 11/28/2008 |
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- Title: my luv 4 u
- Artist: Smighty Mithra
- Description: something i thought of out of the blue
- Date: 11/28/2008
- Tags: loveluvtogether
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Comments (7 Comments)
- BlackDream12 - 03/14/2009
- I like it, it is a nice poem.
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- Smighty Mithra - 12/09/2008
- HELLO THE TYPO'S R ON PURPOSE !!!!!!! wow how can u not tell those are on purpose ???!?!?!?!?!?!? whatever.......
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- morbidmistake - 12/01/2008
- Not sure what people see in it, but it's extremely cliche and you seriously need to fix all those typos...
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- oxo_fox_oxo - 11/30/2008
- thats a cute poem
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- Johntheexile - 11/29/2008
- Not a fan of luv as opposed to love. Otherwise pretty decent.
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- Smighty Mithra - 11/29/2008
- Ty
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- ricky12332 - 11/29/2008
- dude nice poem
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