{Silent} Alone {Screaming}

• Artist: Rook219
• Description: Actually... I wrote the first part of my poem during a rough time... Then a certain someone came my way and I wrote the second part...
  
  It's probably not my best of works but it has much meaning to me... So forget you, if you don't like it =P
• Date: 12/02/2008
• Tags: silent alone screaming

Silently I scream,
No refuge in my "friends",
They don't know me,
understand me...
I fake a smile,
a laugh,
Just to hear myself living.
I stumble in the dark,
alone,
blind...
I write my pain,
let it engulf me,
I drown in my loneliness.
Silently I scream...

Yet you have heard me,
Been the refuge I once needed,
You know me,
understand me...
No longer a fake smile,
my laugh now real,
and a meaning in my life.
You steadied my life and showed me the light,
stayed by my side,
opened my eyes...
You completed my puzzle,
felt my pain,
saved me from despair.
And... I have loved you...

Comments

[Daisuke Suzuki]

I don't really get poems, but it sounds uhh meaningful? Lol. Anyways great job Ants.

[Nikki4815]

very nice. *favorites*. Rate back? My entry is called "Unspoken Message"

[pandoraskeeper]

that was really a good poem i felt what u were going through

[Dreamy Sundrops]

Wtfruit 5/5 5/5 D:
Well its great that your happy x]
6/5 biggrin ..... il just vote two times :]
in one way or another <.< >.>

[vampiregirl98]

Wow that was awesome and i seriously mean that, it gives me inspiration. i could feel the emotion of pain in the first part of your poem and it hooked me right in. I would have to be an idiot not to give your poem a 5/5 biggrin

[sailorlove25]

wow this is great im glad you found this other person! It brought out the happiness that was hidden in ur heart

[forgetten-angel15]

oh my ...
it's beautiful 5/5