My Broken Heart..

• Artist: Miya902
• Description: I was writing somethings out while being really upset.. writing helps me calm down..and it just came out as this short poem..
  
  It kinda suxs.. but it how I feel.. Im hoping certain people read this..
• Date: 12/03/2008
• Tags: broken heart

my hearts like a broken glass...
love goes in and pours right out..
My heart was thrown in the trash..
I wish someone would figure that out.

I wish someone would save it..
my broken heart.
Please someone come fix it.
before it parts...

Comments

[Cryling]

Don,t cry about love love always does that but it will come back if you look four the right one but go slow or you,ll lose him.

[RoflPenguin]

im a fan XD

[Ame_To_Ame]

I feel one out of two writers, at least once in their life, write something not so different from this.
It's all been said before.
While I'm all for writing if it helps you feel better, I can't say I love this.
Your grammar is almost good, compared to most of the poems on here. Still could use some work though.
Overall, a little less then average, but okay for this site.