Darkness In Which to Hide

• Artist: eternal_lestat
• Description: A poem in which I wrote myself, telling of the hearts which desire and yearn for the one which seems to be slipping away.
• Date: 12/08/2008
• Tags: darkness hide

In darkness where I hide
Driven by ones own failure
Hiding as shadows cast down
Following beats to radiate such pain.

Neither can love; as it breaks in two
Further falling into darkness
An abyss of sadness; clinging to emptiness
Reaching into nothingness; yearning to feel.

Your light once my own
Vanish now nothingness completes me
This heart into stone; cruel is the ice surrounding
Vicious torments minds setting to lashing barbed tongue

Comments

[hotti4sho]

yo s**t b ok but iv seen worse so u kool im not even go lie that s**t was on fire

[xXx_S3XII_xXx]

ii Like This Poem....5/5
=D

[eternal_lestat]

Thank you so much! That means alot to me... it really does. Everyone that has come by and voted or commented.. Thank you=]

[Arock-The-Demonic-13]

Well what makes a poem? That you say its a poem! So this is actaully a really good poem..

[eternal_lestat]

It's not rhyming..

[xXxKiss_Me_GoodbyexXx]

doesnt have to rhyme!!! i like it,btw! 4/5

[iiMisaki]

ITS NOT RHYMING!!!