The Battle of Free Will is NOW

• Artist: PsykoLoki13
• Description: this thing just poped into my head one day
  and i just had to write it out
  
  i showed it to my friends and a few of my teachers and they said its a true work of art
  
  i really didnt think so
  till after i kept getting told that exact same thing told to me over and over
  
  i hope u like it
  let me know wat yall think
  k
• Date: 12/13/2008
• Tags: judge living free will souls

SURRENDER the SWEET pleaser if watching you plung into the depths of the FLAMES I have created from the DARK and TWISTED souls of the IGNORRANT AND and the ARROGANT.
...I SHALL PURGE YOU CLEAN OF ALL WRONG...

I shall PROTECT THE TRUE, THE WEAK and PURE OF HEART as I VANQUISH the Eath trom the DARKNES of the WAYWARD HEARTS

The TRUE BATTLE of LIGHT and DARK has AT LONG LAST come...
...COME and JOIN IN...

I have SOLD my SOUL to LIGHT and PEACE.
BUT is CURSED with the DARK, SWEET, and RICH BLOOD of DEATH, and LUST.
The TASTE of that BLOOD is, as DESCRIBED BY the WORDS which I have let SLIP off my LIPS, is ADDICTIVLY SWEET and TEMPTING.
...you MUST NOT TASTE it...

Some of the SORRY and PITIFUL SOULS that FOLLOW the DARKNESS of the HEART, have ALREADY been PURGED in my FLAMES.
While a FEW of the OTHER BROTHER LIGHT SPIRITs have BECOME GREAT ALLYS to TRUST and AID in this FIGHT....

...now... what shall YOU do....BROTHER of FREE WILL????

Comments

[Dancing Armadillo Mage]

You really need to edit this for grammar and spelling. The caps are interesting but I think they would be more effective if you used them more sparingly.

[Ms Disdain]

And pleasure. I think that's what it was meant to be, anyway!

[Musical Mask]

You spelled 'Earth' wrong