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A kiss as swift as a butterfly
Like clean, beautiful so
Like clean, shining with glow
Shining like a star
Sparkling so far
Mysterious its death
Like the sun coming up,
Just as colorful and happy as well as awakening.
Awakening like a shock
Or a bolt of lightening
Made by groups of energy
Like running, much as fast, as it can slow
Like the end of the day
Just as longing as excited for the next day to come
But instead,
You find out your dead.
The end of the story, The end of the day
No more days or worship or pray
No more longing no more fright
Indeed you shall not waste this night.
This night came for a reason.
It came for a shock.
It came for your life to be put on lock.
No longer shall you be happy.
No longer shall your days be colorful.
Forever shy and quiet,
Mysteriously quiet
The shadows’ stars are sparkling extra bright
Such a shinning glow is outtasight,
Swift as a butterfly, clean like the sea.
Reminds me of a memory,
Of that last kiss, the last kiss good-night....
- by 2 much mcdonalds |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/13/2008 |
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- Title: Last Kiss goodnight
- Artist: 2 much mcdonalds
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Description:
I had to right a poem in the 7th grade for a poetry journal and this is the poem, promiss me that you will read all of it and don't stop reading it or judge it because of its beginning read it all!
Hope you guys like it!
~Angel~ - Date: 12/13/2008
- Tags: last kiss goodnight
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Comments (2 Comments)
- downcast drizzle - 02/19/2009
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It was good enough, a bit all over though. It didn't exactly have a theme (I couldn't percieve it anyway) and was a bit all over the place. I know that you probably had to write it in specific way, but the way it carried into the next line bothered me too. And I think you should've broken it up into stanza's.
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- kickashemo - 01/12/2009
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HELL YAH THAT WAS AWEOME GOOD JOB 99999999999999999999/5
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