- When you leave, I can't feel anything. I can't see, I fall into the dark, into an un-ending eclipse. When you leave, nothing feels right. I can't wake up, it's like a sleepless coma. I always pray you'll come back, because I can't take the pain. When you leave, I die.
- by Apocalyptican Dreamer |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/13/2008 |
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- Title: When you leave
- Artist: Apocalyptican Dreamer
- Description: This is a random thing about feelings..I hope you like it!
- Date: 12/13/2008
- Tags: leave
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Comments (5 Comments)
- MsSmith1016 - 06/02/2009
- this is sad...but you did a really good job on this...keep writing...and try not to make anybody cry...lol
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- kyoko_miyamoto - 02/16/2009
- Wow.. ahah.. I expected strong words.
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- MuseLover68 - 12/14/2008
- wow....4/5
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- Mercury Trickster - 12/14/2008
- -steals Player One's wallet- This is great biggrin
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- Chivalrous Erik - 12/14/2008
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I'm sorry if you feel like that, It's horrible. *hugs*
And anybody who flames this writing will burn in hell so your doing us a favor too. ^-^ - Report As Spam
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