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The timeless mysteries of love
Like God sent angels above
Things come and go
But i shall never let go
The time of you and I
You are the person for me
Which shall never blow
I've known a time ago
No one knows the meaning
Of the word being
The love of you and I
- by brinababy77 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/14/2008 |
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- Title: You and I
- Artist: brinababy77
- Description: i wrote this in 5 min. poem
- Date: 12/14/2008
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Comments (5 Comments)
- 0DD_S3X - 05/25/2012
- Rather rate the comments than your poem.
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- Princess_xoxo7 - 05/20/2009
- I dont get it
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- l_Shamrock_l - 01/13/2009
- I second Alitare
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- ZombifiedKitten - 12/15/2008
- I don't get it...Also poetry takes time, you have to feel what you're writing.
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- Cottoncandyocbra3 - 12/14/2008
- Very broken, and incoherent. You lack imagery, and has no real rhyme scheme(were you trying to rhyme?) It feels cliche and everyone has done it before. This poem has no impact. 1/5.
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