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Part I:Anger
Lying, fetid corpse of strung out- cancer cells,
Spitting in my face as I walk these morbid hells
Feeding on my soul, so weak and scarred,
The truth, a saving light, was it so hard!?
But, no, no! No god damned truth for me,
No shining sun to set me free.
Just a callous illusion stamped on the heart,
bleeding, corroding, til it gets ripped apart!
All I ever asked was for honesty to reign,
But got instead naught but misery and pain,
Slicing through, a knife in motion,
Swimming forever in this burning ocean,
Not even getting to fade away,
just drifting in the mist, so gray,
A peace I have been so denied,
All because you ******** lied!
So I burn this bridge with spirit oil,
And grind my bones in endless toil,
Breathing out my last hard sigh.
Spiraling down, to finally die.
- by Cottoncandyocbra3 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/18/2008 |
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- Title: Part I - Anger
- Artist: Cottoncandyocbra3
- Description: Part I of a III part series
- Date: 12/18/2008
- Tags: part anger
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Comments (4 Comments)
- SirynECrow - 04/11/2009
- I like this one not only for the emotion that eminates from the words, but also how well voiced that emotion is. The words flow, forming powerful images and evoking specific emotions. Well done.
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- whitejade13 - 12/31/2008
- Oh yes, the fact that you're angry is quite clear. Very good. 5/5
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- iiReina - 12/29/2008
- this really is anger...o.o 5/5 for sure~
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- Bleuraven123 - 12/19/2008
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WOW!! Once again, a big hand folks!! ^.^
say, I'm just wondering but since there are three of these, are you mad at this time? ^^' - Report As Spam