I Look At you

• Artist: Teh Magical P0ptart
• Description:
• Date: 12/19/2008
• Tags: look

I was walking in the
park seen you walking by
you give me the face of
a million face's you look
at me with hate you eyes
It means you love me so

Pass by just to say hello
goodbye don't know what
happen to you what
happen

The world was passing by
don't know what to till it's
gone

Thiers nothing i can do know
What should i do with you
I say hey look at you
whats wrong

Thier goes a tear right down your
face Did i do something wrong

dont know what i did but I say I'm sorry....

Comments

[Missunderstood soul]

it seemed like you had a good idea then you kinda lost the story, it really goes nowhere you should take the same concept and re-write it

[im a wild wolf]

sks 0/5

[Teh Magical P0ptart]

Plz post thx!