Tears of time

• Artist: xXxViixxennxXx69
• Description: This is a poem i just wrote off the top of my head when i broke up with someone whom i really wanted to be with, but he just used me. I hope you like it, it's rather emo, but i think you'll like it. ^_^. This is an original, please no copying. Rate failrly.
• Date: 12/19/2008
• Tags: tears time

I sit here wondering
Wishing and pondering
Thinking out what i must do
Wishing i didn't have to love you
As the time passed
It all happened so fast
The month and the week
It passed by fast and meek
Too many tears had been shed for you
Too many days had been wasted on nothing that was true
Slowly day by day
The broken heart fades away
The smile returns, on my face
As I fade away to a gorgeous place
No more pain, but this is not death
Just my friends, for I still have breath
I may not be perfect
I may not be rich
But my friends, i can always count to be with

Comments

[Cottoncandyocbra3]

Deep? Honestly? This is not that deep. It is a solid poem, nothing amazing, nothing terrible. 3/5.

[Kelliko_Forever]

5/5 girl u got down n' deeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeep!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Fake Silence]

I like it. 5/5
to me, it's not that emo. comment on my work, okay?
*smile*

[iDessyBear]

Thats deep mann. 5/5 <3