Bleeding and Lost

• Artist: Tess_of_Fallen
• Description: I wrote this becuase it was a dream I had. I don't think it will come true. It must have been a nightmare. But I am immune to those kind of bad dreams titled nightmares. They are the only thing that keep me asleep.
• Date: 12/28/2008
• Tags: bleeding lost

It's dark where I am standing
Darkness everywhere
I am in a pool pf dark waters
Blood-
I curl up
Water burns my vision
Blurs my sight into blindness
It's quiet and dark
I feel like a lost soul
Rejected by the only thing to keep me alive
Myself

Comments

[Tess_of_Fallen]

Thanks

[Your lost angel]

This is nice, if i were you i would change pf to of though XD but anyways its pretty good, and its a strong portrayal of your nightmare, just not too descriptive