If I Let Go

• Artist: LunarSpooner
• Description: this is my first honest attempt at a sonnet, and about the apostrophes, i'm not sure if i'm allowed to do that so bare with me
• Date: 01/03/2009
• Tags: letting sonnet cool sick ugly

If I let go of your wandering hand,
Would the alabaster moon lose its lust’r
In the tidal lashes of your green eyes
Would the sea faring man weep tears at dawn,
If I let go, would the nascent babe grow
Leprous, would mighty palms tumble and rot
That summer’s breeze yield to miasmatic
Gale, that earth’s perennial glow shall flick’r
And fade, Pray that I would have valor yet
To wrench this bless’d havoc from your gallant
Jaw, wish it not though act quick I must but
Try with all my strength to resist knowing,
All powers of fate strong and meek beware
the ineffable past brushing your hair.

Comments

[LunarSpooner]

oops, guess i forgot about that part
thanks for pointing that out

[crooked_signal]

Good stuff. What's your rhyme sceme though?

[Lithium-Irony]

Fantastic.
That's honestly all I have to say.
Keep up the excellent writing!