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The threads of my life begin to unravel
And suddenly I’m alone
So suddenly I’m unknown
Can’t find my way home
I wake up to a new day
As I fall through life so fast
I can’t forget my past
The memories seem to last
And I stumble around so lost
While my reflection makes me sick
My sorrow only sticks
Time ceases to tick
The sun has gone down long ago
And I reach up towards the sky
Wishing I could fly
Oh so very high
The moon is so soft and gentle
As the stars begin to play
So very far away
Ending another day
- Title: Unravel
- Artist: onionio
- Description: I was just experimenting with rhyming patterns, but I liked the result.
- Date: 01/19/2009
- Tags: unravel
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Water of Fenri - 01/20/2009
- It's very jazz meets rhythm!
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- Starlight_Miss - 01/19/2009
- I like it! Rate back please.
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- Lady Alice Road Kamelot - 01/19/2009
- Oohhh! Nice! Most rhyming patterns are boring, but this is intriguing! Love it!
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