the mission of a life time

• Artist: xXGothicVampire666Xx
• Description: many may have fantasys seen movies or thought of something like this befor
  i just had the sense of putting it in a poem
• Date: 01/23/2009
• Tags: mission life time

Do you know how much i love you?
as i walk donw Skyway Avinue?
when i walk down the sidewalk-down the sidewalk not caring what
i was just going to do?

i get ready to fall not
caring that u didn't return my
last call.
i got prepared even knowing that not a thought of this is in your
head, and that your still in bed

so i fall with the picture
of you in my head spinning and
twirlling me swiftly to bed.
my last night with you-
the best- was my only thought when i jumped
to my death

but it's still not over your next to me crying knowing
deep down that i was dying
so i prepared my last words for you hoping that this would last
and then again that my life would end fast

but u had to hear the words that would set
you free so i said to u lovingly with
tears in my eyes

hon your just not for me

and with that i left knowing that my mission in life was done




based on a true story

Comments

[wolfspirit12223]

nicely written. some spelling errors here and there maybe and at the beginning where it repeats itself twice irritate me, but that's just me nit picking.

[Smarties529]

It was good, but you kept chopping the sentences up into another line which made it really hard to read. 4/5