where are we now

• Artist: zima24
• Description: just something i thought of XP
• Date: 01/24/2009
• Tags: where

Me and you have walked to the abiss but even this is just bliss because of your
bitter sweet kiss and i will surely miss. Now i walk cold and alone without you
to call my own. I loved and lost never to see the face of love but i am just a puppet to cupid above. I trusted you with my heart then you killed me now i feel so used and stupid. to be so truly gifted to make some one feel so cold and twisted you oh how you make me feel so sick you sucked me dry like an endless tick. yet that's all i have now time tick tick tick tick till i cry my self to sleep you stabed me oh so deep... drip drip drip. now i am dead in my home and leaving my ghost to forever rome

Comments

[Seireth]

Fairly sweet, young padawan. Continue in the art of poetry, for I sense potential in you. 3/5

[zima24]

Hey i made it longer guys

[Luna Deslumbrado]

two short and plain. but gd

[mrz g33k]

i like it so much

[Pretty Little Muffin]

I like it O_o 4/5 biggrin