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my life would suck without you
without you who would protect me?
without you then, who will lead me into a better place?
without you my life is a living hell!
without you i wouldnt know what to do next in my life
without you im a strawberry without chocolate
without you i might just do something wrong
mabye suicide
so i could be with you
- Title: without you
- Artist: Yo Pappii
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Description:
i wrote this peom becuase
im always alone most of the time
- Date: 02/06/2009
- Tags: without
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Comments (2 Comments)
- xRockstar 202x - 02/28/2009
- very good. i like it
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- Inu MikoYoukai - 02/08/2009
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Beautifuly depressing. No caps doesn't let us know where one idea starts and another ends. Anger should be more pronounced in your writings. The way you write, you are afraid that your other MAY leave. If he/she has left you, it is "does"; assuming she/he is still with you, word tence is correct. You should make that known at either the beginning or the end.
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