Gone?

• Artist: invisiblepaguin69
• Description: this is only part of this poem. anyways sometimes when i cn't leep i write these poems and well, thats it really. its just things that are on my mind in the form of poetry
• Date: 02/07/2009
• Tags: gone poem love

He is so close
but he feels far away
and because of this distance
i fear we will fray.

Wether he knows it or not
he hurts me everyday
when he dosn't talk
what he dosn't say.

I like him alot
but is it a shame
to be afraid
of wether he feels the same?

Comments

[Agrikar the Hidden]

Like it. You should fix it so it's in the poem box though razz .
Anyway, it has good rhythm, which a lot of poems don't have. Good Job.

[oOSpazBerryIceOo]

o my god thats exactly how i feel when you said
"He is so close but he feels far away" and "I like him alot but it is a shame to be afraid of wether he feels the same"

[invisiblepaguin69]

thanjs for checking my poetry out☆