nature poems

• Artist: xX-kAiYa-ChAn-Xx
• Description: um i needed a poem about nature so heres a few tell me wat u think plz.....
• Date: 02/08/2009
• Tags: nature poems

poem #1
I walk down the winding path
the trees dancing in the breeze
I stop by the water
feeling the mist of the fountain
I continue walking
hearing the birds sing their song
I dance along the path
along side the butterflies
feeling as if I were flying
then I noticed I was
emotions filled me
happy
worried
scared
gleeful
I looked around wondering
how
I looked on my back to find a pair of wings
I know I am home.



poem #2

I lay back in the grass
listening to the water
the trees dancing in the breeze
the sun burning hot on my skin
the grass cold on my back
the breeze, as sweet as a flower
the birds singing their gorgeous song
the bugs, chattering among themselves
I lay as calm as a baby in their mothers ams
I stare at the clouds
white as can be
as they dance through the sky
picking out shapes one at a time
a dolphin
a boat
a shoe
a wheel
I could go on for hours
but I do not dare
for somewhere far off in the distance I here a bell
and know my dream must now end

Comments

[jdude1012]

I like them both. They leave you thinking. That's good in a poem.

[xX-kAiYa-ChAn-Xx]

ty sis

[x-Tsuki_Hyuga_Uchiha-x]

The first one's a little confusing.
The second one's good.
If you're gonna use 'em for class, make 'em more compressed.
Good job, sis!