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Oh! Lord on high
Deliver me
from such an unatural affliction
from such unbearable oppression
save me from depression
Oh!!!save mine heart
I no longer care
send an angel or sinner it no longer matters
when my soul is in tatters
someone to hold me, to hug me
to help me stand
in the dark abyss
all I want is bliss *pause*
Lord deliver me
from an unimaginable affliction
from such a cruel depression
someone hug me, hold me
help me stand
saint or sinner any in demand
to help me escape such an unbreakable brand
Oh lord help me land*pause*
sands of recession
bleak reflections
blank deflections
anger, suspicion
Saint, Sinner
help me stand
hold me, hug me
love me...
*reprisal*
- Title: save me
- Artist: zebppir
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Description:
Honesty Greatly Valued or HGV
I came up with this on the way from school and I decided to post this song
and who knows maybe this will help someone other than myself
Comments deeply welcome - Date: 02/18/2009
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Comments (3 Comments)
- zebppir - 04/05/2009
- thanks for commenting ^_^
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- Cottoncandyocbra3 - 02/22/2009
- Not too bad. Somewhat emotional. Clear and tangible, without being too boring. Acceptable poem, good sir. A bit plain, but fine. 3/5.
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- Sorikia525 - 02/19/2009
- I like it, well done, ^_^
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