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Everything's been said
Everything's been done
Your actions they hurt
But your words had stung.
I've worked quite hard
All these years
And it was you
That I have feared.
I've been through a lot
I've been very stressed
I did so much
But failed to impress.
I have a better future
But he's still your favourite
It's such an unfair world
Where girls are discriminated.
Please Daddy please
All I care right now
Is just for you
To feel proud.
- Title: Please Daddy
- Artist: Angielaa
- Description: A girl has a father who has the traditional thinking that girls are useless and boys are blessings. She wants to make her father proud of her but always fails to do so. Tell me what you think.
- Date: 02/25/2009
- Tags: please daddy parents discriminate siblings
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Captain Taii - 12/02/2011
- Simple, yet articulate.... I liked it smile
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- Fo-eights Beach Fo-eights - 02/28/2009
- It was okay up until the last stanza where you stopped trying to rhyme. That was just kind of weird.
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- King of Trash - 02/26/2009
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Saddly this is the way alot of parents are....
5/5. for speaking the truth. - Report As Spam