My true friends

• Artist: -l-Jerez-l-
• Description: This is just a short piece on my true friends,I have found a few and I want you to know I love you!
• Date: 03/03/2009
• Tags: true friends

Oh what a joy to have such friends, biggrin
The true ones that'll stick by you until the end,
The ones who listen to you, biggrin
The ones who help you get over the aches you're going through,
The ones who you may not always get along with,
But in the end,it's not a habit,
The ones who make you laugh, xp
The ones who understand,
The ones who aren't afraid to say,'You're going wrong,'
The ones who love you so much,
The ones you want to always keep in- touch,
The ones you just cannot lose,
These are the ones you choose,
These are very rare,
But I have found a few,
And to all of you who are,
I want you to know I love you! heart

Comments

[-The awesome Jordan-]

that was good,it is always good to have frens like that ^_^ 5/5

[-l-Jerez-l-]

Thanks xD

[emeraldpuppy9]

thnx for the comment XD
this poem ish good, its great to have friends lik that ;D
i have some friends who are more lik family than my actual family, <3 them ^^
suggestions? uhm... maybe expand it? and make stanzas?
anyway, great job, 5/5

[-l-Jerez-l-]

Thanks,any suggestions?

[greennywithblood420]

i luv it.

[-l-Jerez-l-]

Hey guys can you comment please?