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Pain
As your wrists bleed
Pain runs through your mind
Through your body
Through your soul
As you sit waiting for time to pass
As tears of pain run down your face
A sight of hell went through your
Painful thoughts
Wishing, hoping life would end
Your wish is granted as you fall to the floor
You lie motionless your soul detaches from your useless body
Down to hell your soul drops
Dies and awakens as a new being
As a demon of fire and storm
You wait and cry as steam radiates from your flameless body wondering
what have I chosen
Thomas C. Haugerud </3
- Title: Pain
- Artist: TC1313
- Description: This is my first poem i ever wrote i hope you enjoy it Please Comment!!!
- Date: 03/23/2009
- Tags: pain hurt suiside
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Comments (3 Comments)
- kittttykay - 04/02/2009
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It was a little too cliche for me and a LITTLE too gory for my taste, but that's just me.
I mean, I'm not the happy-go-lucky type girl, but damn this poem made me just wanna die... - Report As Spam
- Buttercup Veela - 04/01/2009
- that was good. and slightly eire. but good nevertheless!
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- TC1313 - 03/31/2009
- Common Comment! i wanna know if my work is good!
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