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Clouds and Mists
Of a dark shade of blue, black, white and grey,
Dear Clouds and Mists,
you remind me of how lonely we were
How we were sad once upon a time
the lame sadness
Comes and goes..
We never gained
and never lived..
Never long enough
To hear the breezy wind
To hear birds chirping,
All I could hear is the pounding rain
And in our Loneliness, Darkness surrounded us
Forever to watch,
Forever to see,
Forever to be,
Of deep blue sorrow,
Never meant to belong,
Never meant all along,
Alienated and broken I sit on the roof
And you watch the pain
The pain of being, fractured and broken
But yet, I can’t hardly feel sad enough,
For it is not my pain that I’m feeling,
But yours..
- by silven_flameblazer |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 03/26/2009 |
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- Title: Clouds and Mists
- Artist: silven_flameblazer
- Description: This is a poem about sharing sadness and sorrow of one another
- Date: 03/26/2009
- Tags: clouds mists
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Comments (6 Comments)
- silven_flameblazer - 04/02/2009
- so much easier, I'm writing a script in which theres a scene of happiness and i'm getting stuck every 2 lines lol
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- JimmyTheYellowHighlighter - 04/02/2009
- I thought it was nice ^^ isn't it much easier to express sadness than joy?
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- Christian_Vendrasyl - 04/02/2009
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Touching man... though it really does not fit my life at all.
I say that this is a great poem... no... this is EPIC.
You might want to know why? I felt this poem entering my systems.
Great work 5/5. - Report As Spam
- mei aizen11 - 03/30/2009
- this is actually cool..poet worthy perhaps
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- Vicious Mockery - 03/27/2009
- LOVE it!!!! I'm going to submit one of mine...soon. 5/5
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- cooll666725 - 03/26/2009
- Very nice. I write my own poems as well. If you get time take a look at em. I'm giving yours a 5/5 rating for being the best thing I've read tonight. ^_^
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