Fire

• Artist: Astral Sun
• Description: Fire.
• Date: 05/08/2009
• Tags: fire flames burn

Fire burn red,
fire burn black.

Swallow me,
green flames,
lick my skin.
Eat my clothes.

Fire.

I am gone now.
Ash.
Charred spot on the ground.
I'm gone.

Comments

[tobiwants2cookies]

I would work on the second and fourth stanza give them a better flow but other than that it is a good poem