Why to me?

• Artist: gerbils4
• Description: As you can tell by my past work (none) im not a very strong writer. I have learned that emotion is 99% of writing. The rest is talent. This is what break up does to me. I hate this poem because I'm done with her, but this is one of the "best" (no comment) peices I have ever done
• Date: 05/25/2009
• Tags: break down love hate done

I'm a man
who loves to care
and loves you when
you're in dispare
I wish that you
would care some more
you destoyed my Heart
now blood and gore

Why do this Now?
Why to Me?
I'm sorry if
I cease to see
how you love
two at a time
One you kiss
One you blind

I have no choice
but beg you back
my soul of glass
is fiercely cracked
my heart is gone
it's broke in two
all its blood
spilt over you

I'm never good
enough to be
the one that any
want to keep
I try and try
but never will
I'm always left
in sulking Still

You'll never want
and never need
the one that you
just left to Bleed
I'm Bleeding now
that lost, dumb guy
the pain, it hurts
I want to die...

Comments

[Ms_F-cking_Fierce]

i like it, you put a lot into it and its inspiration is kind of obvious...

[Kokoro Hinote]

i think its rly good....add me ok