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Be you the one who lies to his mother?
Be you the one who is true?
Be you the one who would do for his brother?
Be you the one wouldn't do?
Be you "you"?
Or else,
Be you who?
Be you the soul?
The tongue? Or the shoe?
Be you the person who wants to be someone
Or just the one never knew?
Maybe you need me to reword this question.
I'm wondering,
Who be you?
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- by UWillKnowMeAsThatGuy |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 05/27/2009 |
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- Title: Who Be You?
- Artist: UWillKnowMeAsThatGuy
- Description: Sometimes I don't really have a reason to write, I just do. That is the case with this poem. I just felt like creating a fun poem that had good rhythm and rhyme. Here it is.
- Date: 05/27/2009
- Tags: question self rhythm thought thatguysub
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Comments (5 Comments)
- UWillKnowMeAsThatGuy - 05/28/2009
- Thanks dude! ^^ Lol. I love comments... *cries*
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- Cat_Mino - 05/27/2009
- I saw this to mean that some people don't know who they are, but if they do, and they're masking their personality with another front, no one else knows who they are.
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- UWillKnowMeAsThatGuy - 05/27/2009
- Ha! Thanks, lol. That is exactly the kind of reaction I was looking for! ^^
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- floella_waterlilly - 05/27/2009
- It's really good. Kind of confusing at first but from the middle of the poem to the end it reveals what the poet (you) are really trying to say. smile smile
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- UWillKnowMeAsThatGuy - 05/27/2009
- Yep....just rated myself, lol.... But so what?! At least I gave it a 4 out of five stars.... I think thts what it deserves, anyway. It's not my best, but it's certainly not my worst.
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