Depressed

• Artist: Dragons Willow
• Description: I guess this is my way of laughing off my depression . . . XD. . . .please review! If not this than another? yesch?
  note: this is an old one of mine...so...i'm not depressed anymore...i dont think...
• Date: 06/01/2009
• Tags: depressed depression humor silliness

"Depressed"


Once upon a

midnite dreary

(kinda, sorta,

but not really),

I found myself

depressed and sour,

until one day

at dawn's dark hour.

Alas, I slept

and had a dream

of cake, hot guys,

and ice cream.

When I awoke

I was refreshed,

then with a choke

was again depressed.

~END~

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Comments

[sk8terpunk718]

haha this is funny! i love the poem cuz u were making fun of the raven( my fave poem!) keep writing poems u will get far in life if you become a poet!! biggrin

[final scene]

I really liked the last part where you get deppressed right after you finally become happy cuz that same thing happens to me all the time.

[DeathLies]

Not bad. Can;t say I dream of cake personally? lol.
As someone stated, is best to laugh or find a reason to smile.

[PikaPowerx3]

Its always good to laugh off your depression. When I'm depressed I watch Larry the Cable Guy or a different funny show. Great poem, Love the flow. 5/5 =]

[fancy-painted-boats-]

Nice one!

[ellyema]

nice! don't be depressed again! ^_^