With All My Heart

• Artist: Pikarat
• Description: This is the first song I have ever written. If you see anything that needs to be improved in it, please leave a comment and I will get back to the drawing board. I have improved it quite a bit. This one has more rhyme. But I am not to sure about the rhythm though. So, enjoy. I unfortunately do not have a melody for it yet.
• Date: 06/02/2009
• Tags: with heart rewritten

I cry on your shoulder
A kiss on the cheek a moment to keep
You hold me so tight in your arms
This is the worst day that I've ever had and this makes me really sad

Good bye, good bye my love
It's time for me to go home soon leaving you with this tune
I love you (I love you), I don't want to leave (I don't want you to leave either)
Although we may be apart I will love you with all my heart

We live so faraway
More than a couple states that part I really hate
Our love grows when we are near
I really want to come but you can't because of my mum

Good bye, good bye my love
It's time for me to go home soon leaving you with this tune
I love you (I love you to), I don't want to leave (I don't want you to leave either)
Although we may be apart I will love you with all my heart

The bus is here I must go
I truly will miss you my dear just remember I will not disappear
I grab my stuff and hold your hand right to the bus
You give me a long kiss for it is each other we will miss

Good bye (Good bye), good bye my love (I will miss you) I know
It's time for me to go home now I will come back I take that vow
I love you (I love you to so dearly), I don't want to leave (I don't want you to go)
Although we may be apart I will love you with all my heart.

On the ride I think of you
I cry over and over again missing you I have gone insane
I feel like I'm in hell so far away from you
I want to be with you right now but I just wonder how

I'm gone, I'm gone my love
I am almost home now all I can think is wow
I love you, I wish I didn't have to leave you
Although we may be apart I will love you with all my heart

I'm gone, I'm gone my love
I am home now still all I think is wow
I love you, I wish I didn't have to come back home
Although we may be apart I will still love you with all my heart

I love you I love you I love you I love you with all my heart
I love you I love you I love you
With all my heart I will love you forever

Comments

[Pikarat]

^^ Thanks dude. But I mean go to my journal. I have the first one. It is not that great. This one is hella better. XD

[LotWPro]

4/5

[LotWPro]

As i said in forum, needs tweaking... nice though