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You smile...
My body freezes
Your eyes...
Imprisons my heart
Your hug...
Embraces me with warmth and protection
The way you talk to me...
Keep me chained to you
Mesmerized I now know you will never release me
- by Valkyrie Vitani |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 06/21/2009 |
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- Title: Helpless Devotion
- Artist: Valkyrie Vitani
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- Date: 06/21/2009
- Tags: helpless devotion love
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- Ace Edmonds PD - 06/26/2009
- Being someone who is madly in love, you embodied it well in this piece of work. Rarely do I give a 5/5, but this gets one.
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- Valkyrie Vitani - 06/22/2009
- thanks i was trying to get that feeling of when you fall in love and want to spend the rest of your life with that person but the relationship is more of like your being held captive than loved.i thought i didn't do that good of a job.
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- candi-crazi33 - 06/21/2009
- sounds like my boyfrend sayin it good job
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