Completed.

• Artist: ll - Cocoa Puffs - ll
• Description: I wanted to write about love.
  This is my first entry.
  Hope most people get inspired about poetry.
• Date: 06/26/2009
• Tags: completed love hope warmth serenity

The light in your eyes gives me hope.
The touch of your hands gives me warmth.
The happiness in your face gives me serenity.
Now all I need is you to say you love me.
Then I would be completed.

Comments

[loveyouremo]

Its short and sweet. I like it. Personally, I would have added a few more lines, but it works fine the way you have it.