Blind

• Artist: phoenixtears11911
• Description: a short song i wrote in 6th grade plz rate and comment!!
• Date: 07/02/2009
• Tags: blind blinded crush

heart Blind heart

You're walkin' right next to me
We’re in the hallway, all alone
My heart’s thumpin’ and I can’t breathe
I’m tryin’ to keep my crush on you unknown

Cuz whenever we’re together
All I can see is you
I’m blinded to anything other
Than me with you

All I notice when you walk by
Is your beautiful, shining hair,
Those beautiful, sparkling eyes,
I can't help it that I stare

Cuz whenever we’re together
All I can see is you
I’m blinded to anything other
Than me with you

Cuz whenever we’re together
All I can see is you
I’m blinded to anything other
Than me with you

Comments

[peacegal45]

*pokes phoenixtears* i like it but u no why....

[Dragons Willow]

this is so cute! it describes a 4 year crush i had...around the same time....critque-wise: the line "I'm blinded to anything other, than me with you"....maybe to make it flow better: "I'm blinded to anything other, than the me i see with you." just a suggestion, but seriously i luv it as is!!! 5/5