Pain

• Artist: Chard0
• Description: I was in reading class and I got really bored. My foot was hurting cause gym class was before reading and then the out of nowhere I wrote this. Please Comment!
  
  
• Date: 07/24/2009
• Tags: pain

"Help!" Was the only thing I wanted to say, but I could not find my voice. I tried to scream, but my throat didn't let me. I tried to look for away to escape, but my eyes were against me. I wanted to cry, but my skin was to dry to let me. My body scream at me every time I tried to move. Pain hit me hard every time I took a breath. And I realize that this was not something normal for a human, nor an animal, and that left one small question in my head, "What has become of me?"

Comments

[The Rift in the world]

um koay this is good, add some for to it,, and try not to make it so umdetailed

[Valoralin]

wow this could be the start of a really good story i would really like to see what u do with this 5/5