maybe now or maybe never

• Artist: Blackknights-zero
• Description:
• Date: 07/31/2009
• Tags: maybe never

the moment that u dream of
may come now
maybe never
but does that stop us
from dreaming
from hoping
from wanting
it to come
even if it takes forever
we still hope it will come now
rather then never
and that hope keeps us
moveing
liveing
and loveing
untill the day our dream comes true
maybe now
or maybe never

Comments

[ProfessorKC]

It's a first draft quality at best since the spelling is so off but the repitition of maybe now maybe never isn't bad. It needs this segregated from the rest of the content to give it focus ... poetry is also visual in art becuase of how the words sit on the page grants meaning ... <sigh> Fix this.