When Death Knocks

• Artist: Pokaberry
• Description: If you look closely, you’ll see that each line decreases by 1 syllable till the second last one. Just so you don’t ask me why – it’s because I wanted to show the countdown of life, and the last line represents how the smallest thing can snap someone back.
• Date: 08/15/2009
• Tags: death knocks

Death is a curious thing-
Where life is forgotten,
And nightmares are dreamt-
Where love is lost.
Then we think;
‘Oh crap.
I left the stove on.’

Comments

[Alexanderpia]

This is adorable... I like how you set it up. The syllable countdown is very clever! :3 I love it!!

[Hisa-Ai]

Very interesting and clever. I like it.