a bird soaring.....

• Artist: Sexy Anime Cat
• Description: its a funny random poem i wrote cause i was bored
• Date: 08/21/2009
• Tags: bird soaring

A bird soaring high and high in the sky
As soon as i i look in the sky
it craps in my eye.......

plzz comment me and plzz tell me if you like it

Comments

[Faerie]

Very ironic..not much though.
If you are going to write please be literate and add more than that.

[AxeSlayerMiyavi]

I can't say that it was short and sweet, give me more please.

[Kooky Cookie Imp]

ARRRGH!I love people who write with capitalization and grammer.Not text speak or whatever it is! 2/5

[tea loaf]

Your poetry is interesting, and a little ironic, but I suggest that you make it a little more descriptive. I also suggest that you read some other poets to a larger view of writing styles.