purple haze

• Artist: ILikeBabyBarPoo
• Description: a little poem i came up with,off the top of my head.
  
  XD this is the first poem i've ever wrote so don't be to hard on me
  
  the world right before your eyes is lost,
  friends,family,and others...never existed.
  
  yet the haze was carefree,it was peaceful.
  
  but still you wait for the day it leaves you,
  releaseing it's lifeless grip on your mind.
  
  but when it does...will you be happy?
• Date: 08/21/2009
• Tags: purple haze

purple haze...

life;lost in thought,
dreams never reached.
forgotten memories haunting you.

the world is out of sight;
covered.....sheilded by purple haze,

to thick to be fog.

colors soak into it,
only to be lost in it's thick puple coat.

the world right before your eyes is lost,
friends,family,and others...never existed.

yet the haze was carefree,it was peaceful.

but still you wait for the day it leaves you,
releaseing it's lifeless grip on your mind.

but when it does...will you be happy?

will you enjoy your colorful world,full of war and stressfull times?

or is the worlds colors truly brightest;
in the purple haze....

Comments

[Becca_dactyl]

It was nice. I understand it, even if the writing itself needs work. Seeing as it's your first, you deserve a good rating. Work on, I'm sure you'll be amazing in no time.