I am........

• Artist: A moose sent by Cyberlife
• Description: The person i really am.
• Date: 10/06/2009
• Tags: love dream girl alone wish

I am the one in the back of the room that no one notices.
I am the girl with the brains but not the looks.
I am the art freak who decorates my room with pictures.
I am the girl who reads lots of books.
I am the a music freak who loves every type of music.
I am a songbird always singing a song.
I am a dancer of my own beat.
I am a person who waits too long.
I am the neighbor who's cheery and sweet.
I am the person, wanting a friend.
I am the problem solver, listening to you.
I am the comforter, hoping for your pain to end.
I am a romantic, making up stories.
I am a dreamer, let me dream.
I am wishing upon a star.
I am different; not what i seem.
I am the girl singing with a brush.
I am the girl dancing alone in my room.
I am the rockstar playing air guitar.
I am having fun playing the broom.
I am the girl sitting next to you, wondering what you did wrong.
I am the one you come to even if its just to hide.
I am the one with all the secrets, sworn never to tell.
I am the one always by your side.
I am the lonely girl wanting to be loved.
I am the one who will always love you.
I am never going to leave your side.
I am hoping that you love me too.

Comments

[Amras Tasatir]

First stanza, I already knew I was going to love this poem. Personally, I dissagree with ProfessorKC. Poetry has no rules; that's why I love it. Poets use their own styles--if yours is unbroken repetition, go for it! Me, I loved the poem!

[ProfessorKC]

Good start for a first. Repettion sometimmes needs to be broken up to grant power to certain phrases. I'd recommend a rewrite, but it's a great start.

Oh, every writer rewrites so no pain tehre. It happens to the best of us ;P

[Ive_Beem_AmUsEd]

that was rally deep down to earth

[A moose sent by Cyberlife]

MY FIRST POEM!!!