Good-Bye My Brother So Dear

• Artist: danzergirl1
• Description: A poem i wrote one day. Plain and simple.
• Date: 10/09/2009
• Tags: goodbye brother dear

I'm siting here, i feel like dieing.
Mother is on her bed,
She hasn't stopped crying.
Why'd you leave us brother,
Why did you go?
The war is evil, it hurt's so bad.
Now your gone, I'm everything but glad.
The depression cuts like a warriors sword,
"I'll come back home,"
Well you broke your word.
Now we're here,
Being swallowed by the pain,
I think we're all going insane.
You're gone, good-bye.
But why did you have to die?

Comments

[Natsumi_the_Neko]

wow this is deep. its really good.

[danzergirl1]

Well, my brother is in the Air Force. But he didnt die.
but i had a dream he DID. and it was horrible
So i wrote this from the feelings in my vivid dream.
And thanks!

[xoxmiztiggerxox]

wow that is deep.what made you write it this?to me it not plain and simple it has colors that show what pain and sorrow is.

[danzergirl1]

Shur shur. lol

[nicemonica122]

wooooooooooow do want to be friends