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Time is a figment of the imagination
Time has no figure, shape or place
But sometimes you wish to turn back
So you could redo anything that was bad
One word set it off
That one word I wish was never said
Things I say never seem to come out right
This didn't end with delight
Regrets have been made
Eyes cry and the soul dies
With the drop of the tears
Our world is pierced
I'm sorry for the words that were said
They were wrong and brought despair
I'm the one to blame
And blame grows into shame
Time doesn't rewind
Never has never will
But please turn back the time
So I can make it right
Love is gone
Love was their
Maybe love will find us again
Because tomorrow will always be their
- Title: Time
- Artist: cuete23
- Description: comments would be nice : D
- Date: 12/23/2009
- Tags: time
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- JaejoongKimforever - 12/29/2009
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"Love was their
Maybe love will find us again
Because tomorrow will always be their"
It should read "love was there" "because tomorrow will always be there"
nice poem btw
rhyme scheme is a lil confusing
but maybe that's how u intended it to be
if u want to add a lil imagery
you could write "hearts cry" instead of "eyes cry"
gives it a lil more meaning
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