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On Rainy Days I think of you because you are so sweet that when I hear your name I go running through the streets.
On Rainy Days I think of you because you are so nice that without you my heart is a solid piece of ice.
On Rainy Days I think of you because you are so funny that without you I act like a dumby.
So come back and make the sun shine again.
- by xXxblackrose1234xXx |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 01/04/2010 |
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- Title: On Rainy Days
- Artist: xXxblackrose1234xXx
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- Date: 01/04/2010
- Tags: rainy days
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Comments (4 Comments)
- -kakashiandyaoi- - 05/30/2011
- i like smile thx for favoriting my poetry
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- Sunafire - 02/02/2010
- It works this poem, room for improvement but as it is it's a beautiful concept.
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- BloodStainLoveStory - 01/09/2010
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not bad.. short but good 4/5
rate me back aye - Report As Spam
- Vexed_Shadow - 01/04/2010
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don't get mad at me! im just a critic cause i like poetry.
So the only thing i didn't like was the third line.
....so funny that without you I act like a dumby.
Only cause you put afterwards. So come back andmake the sun shine again.
You should have put .....so funny and without you my life is no longer sunny.
So come back and make the sun shine again.
Sorry If you think im mean i just think it would be better. - Report As Spam
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