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As love is never ending
pain is never permanent
it comes fast and quick
yet slow and lazy
it leaves as soon as it arrives
yet bunkers down and hides
it makes you sink to the depths
and gets you high as the sky
pain is funny
pain is cruel
pain is here to stay
pain has gone away
- by Starinatthesky |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 01/12/2010 |
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- Title: Sunny clear tears
- Artist: Starinatthesky
- Description: Please leave comments, this is by far the worst peace ive written yet it still has a quality that i think you all might like.
- Date: 01/12/2010
- Tags: sunny clear tears
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Comments (5 Comments)
- StarlightMage - 12/26/2013
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"pain is here to stay
pain has gone away"
Two lines that express opposite here are belonging to the same verse.
If there is that stylistic figure in writing it is unknown to me.
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- Starinatthesky - 01/31/2010
- Do you agree with the fact that its bad or the fact the it has a quality you like? or both??
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- -GracedWithPoetry- - 01/22/2010
- I have to agree with you on the description
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- Starinatthesky - 01/15/2010
- aww thak you, i will!!
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- luvnikiniki - 01/13/2010
- its really good and true!! u should write more
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