Devil's Will

• Artist: Amani_Rose
• Description: A Ballad created for school. I could see this being used for some death metal thing, lol.
  
  HAIL SATAN!
• Date: 01/27/2010
• Tags: devil evil demon hell dark

You hear the violin
And then you're dead
The Devil has taken over
Filling your heart with dread

So here we are
In the pits of hell
Crawling to escape the fate
And break the spell

For eternity we live
Through suffering and pain
So come with me
Through blood stained rain

He is of the dark
He is of the night
From the pits of hell
Conjuring dreams of fright

He's on the move
You better run
Now that he has you
Your days are done

So here we are
In the pits of hell
Crawling to escape the fate
And break this spell

For eternity we live
Through suffering and pain
So come with me
Through blood stained rain

Oh come with me
Through blood stained rain!

Comments

[v v starlight lunaria v v]

dude, this is awsome ^^

[thomulus]

4/5 it sounds cool, but I really don't like parts of the chorus, crawling to escape right seems very out of place in the chorus, I could see it in a song if you had like a big pause, but it doesn't sound very good in poetry