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A darkened moonlit heart
In general it approaches
The murmurs of the wind
Whisper tall tales of the forgotten
Shadows in the truth
Stand high in tales of the abyss
Where weary souls are seen
Through eyes of the beholder
Enclosed breathing walls
Let me know I’m still alive
But still unknown why
The hourglass falls upwards
The slowed motion faults
Stand brighter than the sun
Closer our time draws near
Yet our pace remains constant
The simplistic yet primitive
Outlawed motions of attraction
Help the gods to pinpoint
Their followers of being
Slag dew drops shower
A numbness-like rain
When and why
Do the stars light up the day?
- Title: Tales of the Heart
- Artist: Merlin001
- Description: I started to try to write abstract poems to see people's interpretation. I want to post this up here to see what gaians think of my work. Be gentle...
- Date: 02/16/2010
- Tags: tales heart
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- sora wonk - 02/28/2010
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Help the gods to pinpoint
you can get rid of the "to"
it's not bad, otherwise. a little disconnected, but i guess that's the style - Report As Spam