- The gray tasteless sky glows through the frost fields of the plains. The evening shadows reach upon the landscape for eternity. The mountains arch like gateways through the desolate valley. Plateaus and hills can be seen as the wind touches your faces like an angel. The moon fades as light rich stars rises through the heavens to meet your eye. Why do you inclose yourself when you can experience this glorious evening every day until the end of your mortality.
- by Kazuma Kosetzu |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 02/22/2010 |
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- Title: Rise Away
- Artist: Kazuma Kosetzu
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- Date: 02/22/2010
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- Viktor Laurel - 03/02/2010
- Wow, I didn't know you could do happy poetry! It's my favorite of yours because it's descriptive and it is a refeshing change from the common teenage angst poems that are so undeservingly popular. By the way, you have a slight error. "The moon fades as light the light rich stars rises through the heavens to meet your eye." It doesn't need the word "light" before the word "the". And this is how you spell plateau.
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