Love

• Artist: MoonKnightIV
• Description: i luv gurl
• Date: 02/26/2010
• Tags: lovesexromancesweetsugar

thinkin of u where ever u ar wishing of u cause ur my evening star bright u r in

the evening sky seeing ur beauty makes me cry cause it hurts me when i tell u

goodby wishin how i was in ur room with u, to comefort u threw all the pain ur

going through i wanna be the that u can always turn too cause i luved u once

luv u still always have always will.

Comments

[DandiiBrandii]

Just fix all the grammar, no text talk, and other than that it's a lovely poem. c:

[ii b u n n y b o o h]

Uhmmmm i feel like your poem is missing a few words to complete the understanding of it (haha i feel kinda pro writing like this -_-''' x3 ) and the punctuation threw me off a few times. smile but other than tht it was pretty good

[MoonKnightIV]

so what do u think