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Mommy, daddy? I look through doors everywhere looking for my family all i see is red, red paint on the walls red paint on my shirt I look and look then i find someone a man, he has something in his hand a toy, the man in black walks closer to me as i back up away in a flash he's gone my family is gone and im gone
I awake finding it was a dream all just a silly dream but im no longer a child oh how i wish to be a child again........with family......and most of all the man in black but i am not a child i am a lonesum teen with no place in this world can i keep this up? I cant so why must i live? I shouldnt i should just die
I look for a knife a blade of some sort and as i wish i find one a perfect one for the kill I take the blade point it to my heart and stab myself i feel the pain I wondered for so long how it was to die and now i find that I don't want to die I want to live but once a blade touches a heart its a bad romance so i stay here laying on the ground before i am gone I take one last look at the world and know i wish I would never had to die for i see the man in black again staring at me from a top a roof........crying, my eyes started swelling up and the blackness came and the last thought i had was He cared and he was still here im such a fool for thinking he was gone
- by -K00KI3_ST3ALER- |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 06/25/2010 |
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- Title: A Mistake To Die
- Artist: -K00KI3_ST3ALER-
- Description: This made me cry even though i made it
- Date: 06/25/2010
- Tags: mistake
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Zlae - 05/27/2011
- Deadlylight6 - I understand what you mean, and it can be infuriating..... but you're being a hypocrite. I mean look at your post. Honestly.
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- Deadlylight6 - 07/31/2010
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GGGGGGAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH
PUNCTUATION!!!!!!!!!
holy hell ppl. i cant even count wat number poem this is that has the shittiest grammar, puntuation, spelling or all together!
Its called a stanza, its supose to help ppl read by using an organized group of lines. also helps the reader set a pace so they aint racing across the page!
again....holy hell - Report As Spam
- pinkdragon321A - 06/28/2010
- i love this story i loved every thing but a sad ending wonderful story
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