I love you

• Artist: Xx-Forgotten Mist-xX
• Description: Sleepy and needed to write.. 4 him
• Date: 06/27/2010
• Tags: love

Love is a word that is tossed around.
From person to person till it hits the ground.
In truth I love you but It's not good enough a word.
The way it's used is so absurd.
I can only express in action how much you really mean to me.
So if love is the only word..then let it be.
But I know I can show better than tell.
By holding your hand threw the fires of hell.
By kissing your wounds and blood away.
By rising to great you each and every day.
By smiling at you to show you shine.
By hugging you to show your mine.
By being there to Whisper with my heart the words..so tossed around.. but mean so much to me... "I love you"

Comments

[emsladies98]

i dont no wat that dude said but i think its a 10 out off 10 good job keep it up

[Xx-Forgotten Mist-xX]

I did the by and by thing purposely to put more of a rithum lol but anyway thank you for your criticism and complements n_n

[Infinity J Aligheri]

The first few lines were good but adding all the extra "by"s took away the meaning. But I do like how you used word and absurd. Its very hard to think of a word that doesn't end just like the one you were rhyming it to