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Do you know why a
rose has thorns?
A rose symbolizes the
love and trust of two people,
it is red to show passion,
and how mesmorizing love can be
But then theres thorns.
Thorns are there to protect the
rose from others. It help keeps
love pure and untouched by anyone
Some people will grasp the rose,
and p***k thier hand and bring blood.
Those are the real saints of love.
They will push and push themselves
into someones heart. That might be
a good thing, that might be a bad thing.
It all depends on the rose.
But regardless, anybody who is willing
to endanger themselves to give and bring
love is a hero. Red- their blood on the roses
thorn also symbolizes love. Real love that
anybody or everybody can understand
- by Hina Hikari |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 03/30/2011 |
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- Title: Rose
- Artist: Hina Hikari
- Description: A poem telling about a rose and love
- Date: 03/30/2011
- Tags: rose hina saints love
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Hina Hikari - 04/19/2011
- well, i believe all poems should be in stanza's or the object of speaking- other wise it looks stupid. But thanks for the info.
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- Idiosyncratic Quirk - 04/17/2011
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There is no reason this should be in stanzas. Structurally, it would have been best if this was in prose.
But for the content, you were on the verge of wit but ended up a little-itty-bit redundant.
Other than that, I sort of liked it. 3nodding
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